Oh miss Irie you are really an amazing person and i love the way that you capture light quality in a small space. YOu have variation on what you are doing and it is amazing. Lets go get more inspiration in canada, really we need to spend more time up there experiencing our wonderful continent. Oh irie i really enjoy the shapes that you made with that really amazing computer program, its really annoying eh? well well lets hand out soon and talk about sketch up it could be a blast!! okay see you soon!!
You have a pretty nice progression of images from the abstract aerial to the closeup in the lower right. This would be more apparent if you created a linear display, like a storyboard or frames of a movie.
Your text and titles do a great job of describing what is happening in your compositions. You could try turning X-ray viewing on to make the shards more transparent and lighten the shadows to get a greater tonal range.
For your layout, I appreciate that you created a highly ordered sheet and tried colored backgrounds. The sheet be more effective if you completely eliminated the white field, so that the images glow against the dark background. To increase unity, the text could pick up the colors from the rendering (sky, ground or sculpture). Watch the legibility of your text - it will be easer to read if it is upper and lower case and horizontal.
It is hard to relate to such an abstract structure. More geometric order, rhythm and repetition of elements will make it more interesting. Scale figures or furnishing would put it into context.
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Oh miss Irie you are really an amazing person and i love the way that you capture light quality in a small space. YOu have variation on what you are doing and it is amazing. Lets go get more inspiration in canada, really we need to spend more time up there experiencing our wonderful continent. Oh irie i really enjoy the shapes that you made with that really amazing computer program, its really annoying eh? well well lets hand out soon and talk about sketch up it could be a blast!! okay see you soon!!
Irie,
You have a pretty nice progression of images from the abstract aerial to the closeup in the lower right. This would be more apparent if you created a linear display, like a storyboard or frames of a movie.
Your text and titles do a great job of describing what is happening in your compositions. You could try turning X-ray viewing on to make the shards more transparent and lighten the shadows to get a greater tonal range.
For your layout, I appreciate that you created a highly ordered sheet and tried colored backgrounds. The sheet be more effective if you completely eliminated the white field, so that the images glow against the dark background. To increase unity, the text could pick up the colors from the rendering (sky, ground or sculpture). Watch the legibility of your text - it will be easer to read if it is upper and lower case and horizontal.
It is hard to relate to such an abstract structure. More geometric order, rhythm and repetition of elements will make it more interesting. Scale figures or furnishing would put it into context.
Glad to see your efforts,
Nancy
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